How is my book until I started writing?
How is my book so far? I know I have very little if you have any suggestion or idea to the next paragraph let me know through prayer of the day Dreamer: CH.1 see normal life was good for me (normal life and never for me) until fifteen.I shot had fallen into what you do not like love.But normal teenager i love was good that was in love with a name vampire.His O'Neil Carson it was doped thick dirty blond hair and blue eyes the color of the ocean in a bright and sunny day.He has a smile that not even a tracking model can off.And survey swim when he seemed to feel the earth under your feet underneath you fell. It is the dream of all girls, but it is actually mine, who loves me and I love it.
Sorry. It's terrible. First, if the intention of writing something that you need to know basic grammar and punctuation. And what I see of this show, who do not. In addition, the field is evident … Well, I call … exaggerated if the bird is on fire. I'm not talking about the vampire – I wrote a novel about vampires – but I can predict this story is an imitation of Twilight. And not very good at it. But you see, just because the story is about vampires does not mean it's a stupid fangirl trying make an Edward Cullen. As I said, I write a vampire novel. But my story is original, and I worked very hard to plan so that nobody could say he was copying Twilight. This is not vampires who are cliché, is the plot, so much the better. If you decide to try to salvage what they can and turn the story into something different, I think not. Reach to something completely different, and more time from now, if you still want to do something with this idea, AIN, try again. But the search for original ideas in his first belt. If you're really should do a piece Twilight style then post it on fanfiction.net as fanfiction and not an original. It is the only way out without being crucified.
Senate Session 2011-03-02 (09:30:15-10:38:58)
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