Vampire new comments?
hi all! I wondered if anyone would be interested in reading my vampire novel then me give advice. I'm going to do with the creation of a space problem, but I am worried because my 161-page novel, and as Stephanie Meyers Twilight is like 300 pages. So I do not know if I should add more or maintains it is well and doing a major source for more pages. Thanks .. Here http://www.booksie.com/romance/novel/aishaelizabeth/nightwood-saga:-fangs-1/chapter/1 are some questions …. 1. Would you buy Saga Nightwood: If you publish so real? Fangs Book 2. Do you think the book is too short? Should I add some new scenes? And if so, where do you need them? 3. In the book that you think is going too fast? Scenes, places, etc? 4. Are there any characters that would like to explain more about the history, life, love?
Hello! First, do not go for other books. Many publishers of electronic books and small independent and accept that length. I restate this point, I was very much a creative person that I loved to read, write, sing, play the piano. "I smiled when I thought the dance class was going to be starting today. My older sister Jennifer had to practically drug me to say yes to that. I loved to dance, do not get me wrong, but as my parents murdered and had moved to California to live with Jenna, things had changed and he was not feeling well, I feel entitled to ask Jenna to pay for her, but she just smiled and promised that it was not serious and could easily afford. "I do not know, who does not read correctly. As the first phrase "I'm much more a creative person, I liked to read, write, sing, play the piano." You were a creative person this means they are not creative any:?. Maybe I could be something, "I am a creative person, with all my books, all my writings, I love singing and playing the piano. And this sentence:" I like to dance, make no mistake, but since my parents were murdered and had moved to California to live with Jenna, things had changed and he was not feeling well, I'm not entitled to ask Jenna to pay for it, but she just smiled and promised that it was not serious and could easily afford. "It's too long and too many things in it. You can create a separate paragraph Jenna insistence to pay for the class, impassive less with their parents. You can change this to be something like: "I liked dance events. Do not get me wrong, but as my parents when I moved to California to live with Jenna, I have not felt good. Jenna I was uncomfortable with paying for my class, but she smiled and promised that it was not much and that easily could afford. "By omitting the details of his parents, he creates another level of suspense that help make the reader along. Failure can be a great friend because it is based only bands in his fiction, suspense really make a long journey, without the reader realizing it. Then I'll post some websites for the fictional places that can help.
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